My name is Ben．I was born in Zhangzhou，I lived in a 12 story apartment building，my house is on the ninth floor．【要点一，出生在漳州；住在一栋12层的公寓楼里；家在第九层专；】There is a park in front of the apartment【高分属句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】，many old people and children often do sports there．Look!Many children are flying kites．【高分句型二，注意现在进行时的使用】【要点二，公寓前有个公园；许多老人和小孩经常在那里做运动；看！许多孩子正在放风筝呢】I like playing basketball，I often play basketball with my friends on weekends．【要点三，我喜欢打篮球】